4/5
Well this book is pretty good it also has some problems that cause it not to be five stars. For example Whitetail is a pretty useless character. apparently he's a rouge and when you just realize it he dies! Kind of a waste of time seeing some random cat die. He's affiliated with Tigerclaw and yet Tigerclaw barely does anything other than kill Runningwind. Then Cloudpaw starts eating twoleg food and is captured. I know this is dramatic for Fireheart but then it's solved right after his grieving.
Then this book is more good than it is bad. Runningwind was a background guy so his death wouldn't be very dramatic. So like the first book connected you with Whitestorm Fireheart gets to connect with Runningwind more often. Then finally at his death from Tigerclaw not only does it prove he's worse a villain as a rouge than a clan cat it makes a sad moment with his death. Then shortly after it kills the rouge Whitetail off. Now he and Littlecloud where the only Shadowclan warriors you connect to. Then there's the whole situation where Cloudpaw is captured and Using Ravenpaw to help is pretty cool how he is able to tell Fireheart where Cloudpaw is at, and before that his capture is very dramatic because he and Fireheart's sister Princess where the only family he had close to him. Escaping after saving him was a suspenseful moment that made you just hope Cloudpaw made it out okay. When he did the rest of the book sort of kept him involved. Then the biggest moment happens there is a forest fire. After they all escape they are missing two elders named Halftail and Patchpelt, and they're missing Bramblekit. Yellowfang and Fireheart decide to go save them. Yellowfang has to grab Halftail while Fireheart gets the kit and Patchpelt. When a tree falls between them Fireheart has to keep going and this defiantly makes you aware since Yellowfang is a big character and the reader wants her to get out alive. As Patchpelt breaths to much smoke the older cat dies. This is a new feeling for the reader because Elders have never died before. As you stop thinking about Yellowfang and Halftail, Bramblekit becomes a kind of cat who sees things dramatically and who you connect to. However as you read on you approach his personality carefully because he is Tigerclaw's son. Then Fireheart returns to Bluestar and the others. Finally they stay at Riverclan and you get the idea that the leader of Riverclan will die soon. This is some kind of emotion because leaders have died but never a good one. This scenario reminds you of how Bluestar only has one life left. After a while Yellowfang dies dramatically. However Starclan lied to Bluestar so she no longer attends gatherings which is also a big change in the original ways of the series. Finally the ending tells how Tigerclaw is now Tigerstar leader of Shadowclan! TWIST ENDING!!!! This is a huge cliffhanger and highly persuades you to continue.
Then this book is more good than it is bad. Runningwind was a background guy so his death wouldn't be very dramatic. So like the first book connected you with Whitestorm Fireheart gets to connect with Runningwind more often. Then finally at his death from Tigerclaw not only does it prove he's worse a villain as a rouge than a clan cat it makes a sad moment with his death. Then shortly after it kills the rouge Whitetail off. Now he and Littlecloud where the only Shadowclan warriors you connect to. Then there's the whole situation where Cloudpaw is captured and Using Ravenpaw to help is pretty cool how he is able to tell Fireheart where Cloudpaw is at, and before that his capture is very dramatic because he and Fireheart's sister Princess where the only family he had close to him. Escaping after saving him was a suspenseful moment that made you just hope Cloudpaw made it out okay. When he did the rest of the book sort of kept him involved. Then the biggest moment happens there is a forest fire. After they all escape they are missing two elders named Halftail and Patchpelt, and they're missing Bramblekit. Yellowfang and Fireheart decide to go save them. Yellowfang has to grab Halftail while Fireheart gets the kit and Patchpelt. When a tree falls between them Fireheart has to keep going and this defiantly makes you aware since Yellowfang is a big character and the reader wants her to get out alive. As Patchpelt breaths to much smoke the older cat dies. This is a new feeling for the reader because Elders have never died before. As you stop thinking about Yellowfang and Halftail, Bramblekit becomes a kind of cat who sees things dramatically and who you connect to. However as you read on you approach his personality carefully because he is Tigerclaw's son. Then Fireheart returns to Bluestar and the others. Finally they stay at Riverclan and you get the idea that the leader of Riverclan will die soon. This is some kind of emotion because leaders have died but never a good one. This scenario reminds you of how Bluestar only has one life left. After a while Yellowfang dies dramatically. However Starclan lied to Bluestar so she no longer attends gatherings which is also a big change in the original ways of the series. Finally the ending tells how Tigerclaw is now Tigerstar leader of Shadowclan! TWIST ENDING!!!! This is a huge cliffhanger and highly persuades you to continue.
Good review buddy. Lots of good information.
ReplyDeleteGotta work on your punctuation and technical stuff, but you're doing great at these!